Photographic Practices: Studio Portrait
Although this was one of the first projects of the year it is one which I enjoyed the most. The studio brief gave me the opportunity to develop my skills in the studio, as I had never worked that way before, as well as enhance my skills in the dark room. I was very happy with the final image, as it was well exposed and technically quite resolved, and I felt that my work had developed significantly since the first test shoot.
Evaluation of final image:
Overall,
I feel like my final shoot was very successful, and I have been able to select
a final image which is very successful in terms of technique, as well as being
a striking, and graphic photograph.
I
made two copies of my final image, one of which I selenium toned, to bring out
the highlights. I was pleased with the results, as sometimes prints can be
tinted blue, but the difference in my print was very subtle, although it has
been sharpened quite significantly.
Although
there were a few imperfections on my
print which I could have spotted, I decided against it, as I would rather not
risk ruining the print – the imperfection was in a mid tone area which is a lot harder to mix correctly.
In
general, the exposure of this image is correct, and because of this, I did not
need to dodge or burn any areas in the dark room – the lighting is spread
evenly across the whole subject, and
there is a wide range of tone and contrast.
If
there was one aspect of the final image I would change, it would be the
framing, as the hand has been cropped out. However, I now know that the framing
of an image is something that I have to work on, and I still feel this image was the most
successful in terms of other aspects, such as lighting, exposure, expression,
pose and composition.
Photography and the Printed Page
This was another project which I enjoyed but also one which I felt I learnt a lot from. It was interesting to work on an extended body of work as well as considering other factors such as sequencing, layout and book design.
Introduction to book:
Six
Hundred and Ninety Eight explores through imagery the crime rates in the City
of Bath in 2012. The title refers to the total number of crimes that occurred in the
city in February of this year, and each image was taken based on specific crime
figures from this same month. The map opposite pinpoints the locations in which
the photographs were taken and the statistics throughout describe the crime
rate in that particular area of Bath in 2012 so far. Although the photographs
have been taken with the concept of crime in mind, there are no traces of
specific crime apparent, providing juxtaposition between
the ideas of the imagery and the almost picturesque landscape that
is presented - these are places where crime would not be expected.
Evaluation of book:
Overall
I was happy with the final product, and thought that the layout and sequencing
of the images I had chosen was successful, as it worked well with the ideas
behind the photographs. The book has a formal and factual feel to it, relating
to the statistics and figures I have used to base the project on, and the
layout of the images on each page further reflects this – the images are
presented in an almost forensic and scientific way.
Sequencing and Layout:
The
sequencing has worked well as each image works alongside the other due to the
perspective lines and the atmospheric qualities of the photographs. The time of
day is also reflected in the series, and the book takes the viewer on a journey
through the streets of Bath.
Having
the same format throughout the book means that there is no distraction from the
content; there is a formality to the sequencing, almost as if the book is a
case study of the crimes occurring in the city (straightforward context).
I
feel that the photographs were taken using the relevant format, and the
qualities of the images would have been different if I had used film or a
larger format and therefore they would be read differently.
Text and Images:
After
reviewing the book once it arrived, I feel that I could have placed the
introduction after the images, as the explanation gives too much away. As a
result of this the images become illustrative of the text rather than being the
other way around.
Overall Design:
I
am happy overall with the design of the book, however I feel that the images
would have looked better on matte paper, as the glossy paper can be quite
distracting, and a matte finish would have bought out the shadows and tones
more. I also wish that the text was slightly smaller in comparison to the
images, but it is very difficult to judge this while designing the book.




















